Friday, April 1, 2011

Looking into AMAZING people post

     As i was looking in to Luis Alba blogs and Fermin Carrera i can see their relationships. I can see it because they are both most of the time talk about the same thing. What they just really talk about is living in Oakland and describing it in a way like a good way and a negative way well as Fermin says in his other blogs is that "there is many gang members in Oakland and if you wear a certain color then you might get shot or badly wounded" (Mr.Sutherland can you teach me how to quote things because its not working for some reason which is really annoying and also the link is screwing up too) I am going to agree with Fermin because I see fights at school which was my Middle school and because of stupid things.

     Now, I am going to talk about the comparison. I think that the comparison about Fermin and Luis is about their city and how it is good and bad which I highly agree about that because there is lots of ups and downs. Luis says "Oakland is dangerous for you only if for certain reasons. If you are involved in drug deals, gangs, or maybe in the wrong places at wrong times." That is one of the comparisons i have compared with Fermin and Luis, is that it is bad in Oakland for certain reasons i am guessing they have more to say but they just did not put it down on blogger, anyways the comparison is about how Oakland is terrible in ways. Here is another quote from Luis as he expresses how great Oakland is "Oakland is a great place to live at. If you may not know, I live in Oakland. Oakland is so much fun, so many things to do all day. You can go walking around, play sports, or just hang out with some friends. There are many places where you can go, the park, stores, or just outside." This is true because that is what I do everyday I come out of ASTI because I be bored to death just doing work everyday its bs. Also Fermin have something good to say about Oakland here it is "Luis says that Oakland is so much fun. That there are so many things you can do like walk around, plays sports, or just hang out with your friends. These are some activities that I do," As you can see they agree with eachother but they dont fully agree with everything they think about Oakland as Fermin said in his blog "Well we have a different perspective toward Oakland." I am going to disagree with Fermin because you guys have common things about Oakland that you guys describe in your blog just review your blogs and you will see i know you guys just want to hurry up and finish your homework so you can get it over with but look what you said from the pass.

      Okay, now my opinion about Oakland. Now Oakland is a balance city because its always good and always bad. One week you see kids on the street playing and you hear loud good music and then next week you hear gun shots, police out side, helicopter, and criminals hollering. Well, I like Oakland because its my hometown and i have lived here enough and why should i leave now. I know we see lots of gangs which is really common but you cant tell now and days if they are. Oakland have literally changed i have not seen police arrest anyone near my house anymore which is great. Oakland is terrible and sometimes careful. It seems like Oakland is bipolar. Also Luis be lucky you do not see things go down like before and Fermin just hang in there do not stay outside where you live is dangerous because my cousin live next to you and they told me a lot of things about that area.

UGHHHHH I SCREWEDF UP BIG TIME O WROTE THIS FOR NOTHING UGHHHH

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