Peer Review Comments

For Bany: Explain why you think the book is good in a way i want to see your perceptive. What makes it good what do you like about this book?
You should expand on a summary and more about the characters and show how they life been and how it is similar so it can become more interesting.
The most important thing is to talk about the story more instead of the character.
Your is pretty good but you need to explain more about different characters and the story because that is what its all about.

FOR BEATRICE: NO POST

FOR ADRYLAN: NO POST

For Andy: For your draft Andy you were pretty redundant. Why did you take a quote from Bany do you really need it or u were on a rush and tried to get as much words as you can?
You should expand on why did they write the story and how it is a great book and what you've had learned from it. Basically just write significant things about the story.
Something better you can do in your draft is to become less redundant so then you can write more about the story, also there is no need for you to take quotes from other peoples unless it extremely help you out in your
draft, because you did not even reach to a thousand yet you know that you only reached to 981.
So make sure you take more time in to your draft so that you explain fantastic events in your book ok.

For Christy: For your draft so far is the best i read. Because you bring a lot of detail into and the image pops up in the mind and u grabbed readers attentions like me it is very strong for me to pull my eyes away from your post. In my opinion i feel like reading it myself because of you describing it very well. Good Job!